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Premise Script V1- Draft
Premise Script v1 by Ollie Thacker on Scribd This is the first iteration of the story for my premise project. At first I thought I would do a story based on making gold, as that was the action my character was doing in my Character Design project. However I thought a pilot episode where the character makes his sidekick character. I'm also considering writing the gold making episode as an additional episode. The reason why is because I'd like to do my project as a pitch in order to get this show made into a real tv show. I definitely know there are some things that need changing, especially since this is the first draft of this script. Also I'm hoping that the writing of the script will help me come up with a name for the show, something which I am struggling with at the moment.
Okay - so I can see how you're embracing the layering idea in your third drawing on here... but I think it's interesting that your windows/doors etc are all super-generic - the sort of windows and doors a child might draw when they think about 'buildings' - as opposed to the sort of windows and doors that a designer and Kuhn might visualise. I just don't think it's likely that you and your collaborator would be thinking in squares and oblongs as appropriate additions to these organic structures....
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