Some of the criticism about Mary is she didn't look old enough and she looked as if she was having a Vietnam flashback. I had another go at drawing her using things I see in old people, such as the glasses on the chain and the lines around the mouth and eyes. I'll be starting on Simon soon as he looked like he was high on sugar and also he looks a bit odd to me and I can't explain why (I think it may be something to do with the clay model I'm using as reference)
I have also made some changes with the animatic, cutting out most of the walking where I can after being reminded that I would need to animate all that walking. I also changed a couple more things to be more snappy. I looked at the scene from Hot Fuzz where Nicolas Angel tools up in the evidence locker and tried to mimic how he takes things.
HERO: Po SHADOW: HERALD: Master Oogway THRESHOLD GUARDIAN: Master Shifu TRICKSTER: The Furious Five (Initially), Mr Ping (wanted Po to quit to focus on noodles, discouraged kung fu training) MENTOR: Master Shifu ALLIES: The Furious Five MOTHER: No one fills this role, although Po's Father could also be fulfilling both roles as a single parent FATHER: Mr Ping (Po's Father) CHILD: No one fills this role, perhaps Po is as he seems rather childish initially, playing with toys ect.. MAIDEN: No one to fill this role. I don't think Tigeress is the Maiden as she doesn't need rescuing and she doesn't really fall for the hero SHAPESHIFTER: Master Shifu
This is what my story looks like so far. I'm trying to set it up like a Saturday morning cartoon, a bit outlandish and a bit comedic, but still getting a point across. Story Outline by Ollie Thacker on Scribd These are some of the better drawings I have made over. I am considering redoing the scientist one to make it more basic but keeping the overall style. Images I'm working on by Ollie Thacker on Scribd
Please read - https://ucarochester-cgartsandanimation.blogspot.com/2019/09/fao-caa-years-2-3-your-timetables-are.html
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