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Premise Script V1- Draft
Premise Script v1 by Ollie Thacker on Scribd This is the first iteration of the story for my premise project. At first I thought I would do a story based on making gold, as that was the action my character was doing in my Character Design project. However I thought a pilot episode where the character makes his sidekick character. I'm also considering writing the gold making episode as an additional episode. The reason why is because I'd like to do my project as a pitch in order to get this show made into a real tv show. I definitely know there are some things that need changing, especially since this is the first draft of this script. Also I'm hoping that the writing of the script will help me come up with a name for the show, something which I am struggling with at the moment.
Hi Ollie,
ReplyDeleteFrom a presentation point of view, some of these images are really difficult to see as the pencil marks are really faint...also, some of them are up the wrong way! Don't forget that you want your work to look as professional as possible - so, crop out unwanted backgrounds, up the contrast etc.