Elder Puddlestomp and The Chloro-Blaster- Feel free to tell me what you think

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Elder Puddlestomp- An elder water shaman and member of The Chloro-Pals. His powers over the element of water are invaluable to the team. Some say he has been around longer than plant life itself.

The Chloro-Blaster- Armed with a high tech solar battery and a pair of prototype photon phaser gloves, The Chloro-Blaster is ready to defend his home against any threat. Despite his young age, The Chloro-Blaster leads The Chloro-Pals, his solar powers binding the team together into something greater...

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  1. tutorphil22 March 2018 at 10:07

    Hey Ollie - as is increasingly characteristic of you, lots of invention here... my advice is that you need to 'tidy up' your shapes - at the moment, there's a complexity and asymmetry that will struggle to translate appealingly in terms of character design for 3D - can I suggest you use the custom shapes tool in Photoshop (for example) and then use the 'Transform' tools to manipulate the shapes, as these tools ensure the lines/curves etc are pure and strong and unbroken, which will give you a cleaner foundation for accessorising. For example, if you were to use the 'ellipse/oval' shape tool in Photoshop - so start with a basic egg-shape - and then use the transform tool to create variations of the shape - you'll soon generate a whole bunch of new iterations that will have strong, clean silhouettes... have a go.

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