Collaboration- Final version of our script*

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This is hopefully the final version of my group's script. It has been through several re writes and refinements, especially today after meeting with Dan the acting tutor. This feels like a script I can put my faith in. I feel that the humour is spot on and the jokes should land.
Hopefully, it will translate well into animation (if the real life reference footage is anything to go by I really think it will with a bit of hard work).

 *Subject to subtle changes

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